@Ahugefailer Thank you! Like I said in my last post, don't doubt yourself. Writing is not a talent. If you want to be good at something, you've got to work on it because nobody is born with their different skills. I'm sure your story isn't bad like you're making it out to be. It just started, right? It will progress, and it will get better. You wrote that story for a reason. Theres a reason why any of us decided we wanted to write a story, and let others read it. It's because writing is something we like to do, so continue doing just that. As the story progresses, you will progress as a writer. Keep it up, and you'll turn out great. ((: