You're a writer. Your stories have parts where you readers wonder what going to happen next. For example, when you brought back the most important person for ebony( i think that's how you spell it) the mystery guy. Me as reader can see how others like me want to know what to her in the past that made to be afraid of failure. What happen to her to make her have a hard time to trust someone or being the real her. That the thing I like about your writing skills you put readers to wonder and keep reading to find out what's going happen. You make it so interesting. Just keep doing what your doing because you are so good at it !☺️