Hello hello. Naiiyak ako sa tuwa, sa wakas may nakapagsabi ng kung anong mali at kulang sa storya. Thank you so much, just to clear things. As far as I remember meron pong third person shifting of pov sa storya and PJ,Aria, Vermis, Steven palang ata ang may available point of view :))
PERO thank you talaga dyan sa comment mo aaah. :D I'll add some details na din as you suggested. :) God Bless♥