Your writing captures The Originals atmosphere perfectly—moody, tense, magical, and intimate. Davina and Ellie’s dynamic feels natural and warm, with the right blend of teenage softness and supernatural weight. The fear around Klaus is written with exactly the right edge: quiet, heavy, believable. Shifting into the Quarter and introducing Cami gives a great contrast—light vs. danger, innocence vs. secrets. The pacing is smooth, your character voice is strong, and the emotional undercurrent (Ellie carrying a secret identity that could destroy everything) lands really well. Overall, it's vivid, immersive, and fits seamlessly into the TVD/Originals world.
