@DanielleJoy25 sorry about that I'm not one to leave comments much. I liked the story, its not something I'd normally read but I'm glad you suggested it. Alyn and Lindy are written well, I like how you made Lindys background tragic, but still kept her as strong and happy at most times. It's a nice change to how people normally write tragic characters. I wouldn't say it shocked me, but I was slightly surprised at chapter 13.