Hello everyone! Some BIG updates to The House today, I'll list them all below!
- I have condensed the parts down into Chapters, for ease of readin access.
- I have also re-written and added a few new lines here and there in Chapter I and Chapter II.
-Chapter II, Jess's introduction, has pretty much been completley re-written, to show off the dynamic between Jess and Smithson much more clearly, and gove more of a better understanding of her character.
Do re-read when you have the chance, and le me know what you think!