parkchanyeolover

hi there friend~! mind checking out my story? it's a Sehun one! I will gladly appreciate it if you can read, vote and also comment what you think about the chapters! Arraseo? If you don't want to it's okay. Kamsahamnida chingu! saranghae xx~

exol24

You got a great story going on there! I read the first chapter and so far, it's actually quite interesting!  Just a tip ( I'm sorry if I'm being rude, I just want to help XD), try using more show-not tell to get the the readers more interested.  And thank you soooo much for voting, commenting, and liking my story, I know it's not that good but thank you for some encouragement!! I really like your story plot though! Keep up the daebak work Chingu! 
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