exoticthoughts_

I need opinions on my story, honest opinions. Is it good or is there something I need to fix?

haanigurl

it’s good! very good, i really like how everything chapter went and i’m not at all complaining about it. the storyline is perfect 
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fibbers

I think it’s good. I like the part where he takes care of Nora
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exoticthoughts_

I need opinions on my story, honest opinions. Is it good or is there something I need to fix?

haanigurl

it’s good! very good, i really like how everything chapter went and i’m not at all complaining about it. the storyline is perfect 
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fibbers

I think it’s good. I like the part where he takes care of Nora
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