Jiminskyie

Hi, if you don't mind, can you take a look at my fanfic! I'm kind of like a new writer so it would mean a lot to me if I could get some feedback! Thank you and sorry for begitu annoying
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/278773331?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=DeaDamayanti2&wp_originator=zDNOs6B18Tv08rQctzB2B5NgWlKdLQmUf02pyx%2BvJm5kYpXoTkf5QEtnsfPtRXgGNEmEwYor8r1sdzaqv8uxtNc97smI41bF1PHdbv%2Fv23J0kOEw%2BzuUnmBBJ5We0dgE