Exxtery

I really really appreciate your reply. I'm happy to know that you'll stick till the end. You don't have to vote or comment or anything. Just enjoy how the story unfolds and feel free to give ANY feedback if you feel like it. I could really use criticism and feedback, especially since the story is still building.
            Enjoy your time, and have an amazing day!
            Again, I'm really sorry for using your board for this conversation. And thank you for having this discussion with me. I was genuinely confused and wanted some advice and thought on my work. Surprisingly you came to my mind first mostly because you have been here since the start. So again- thank you for that!
            
            ♡
            

@Autumn_storiesxxx
            I honestly didn’t expect such a detailed reply and I’m really glad my feedback helped you a bit, but at the same time, I want you to know there’s absolutely no pressure from my side at all.
            
            And please don’t worry about disappointing me. I’m just here because I genuinely enjoy your story, not because I expect anything from you. Also, writer’s block is completely normal  it just means you care about what you’re writing. Take your time with it, seriously.
            
            I’m really excited that you already have the whole story planned, that actually makes me even more invested in seeing how everything unfolds.
            
            Also, don’t feel like you need to rush changes or fixes. The dynamics with Reed and Luca, Kaden’s POV, everything like that  I see it more as things that can naturally grow over time as the story develops, not things that need to be addressed immediately.
            
            Since your story is still quite early (27 chapters is really just the beginning, especially for something that feels like it’s going to be longer), a lot of the things I mentioned before aren’t really “issues” at all. They’re more just things I find myself curious about as a reader, or things I can see having space to naturally develop later on.
            
            So there’s really no pressure at all to focus on them right now it feels more like parts of the story that can expand over time as everything builds.
            
            And about Kaden’s POV I don’t think it’s bad at all. It’s more that Natasha’s POV is just so emotionally immersive and detailed that it naturally stands out to me as a reader. So it’s less about something being “missing” in his chapters, and more about how strong Natasha’s emotional perspective feels in comparison.
            
            Overall, I just really enjoy where everything is going,  and I’m really looking forward to seeing how the story develops.
            
            

@Autumn_storiesxxx Thank you so much. Your feedback helped me understand things a lot more. I will definitely add more scenes including Reed and Luca. I will try my best to intensify their dynamics. And about Kaden's pov, I admit it did feel distant and different. I didn't know how to proceed with it so it got sloppy. I will defined edit it and add more chapters with his pov.
            Again- I just can't say it enough -your support is everything. You're such a diamond. 
            
            I hate to admit it but I am going through writer's block. So the chapters may get messy. But I promise I will edit things and do my best in the future.
            
            Hope I don't dissapoint you. I have the whole story planned already and I'm really excited to see how it turns out!
            
            With lots of love and gratitude, 
            Autumn