rosegold1414
Wow, I just finished the first chapter of your new book, and I'm already excited to see where this journey with your main character will lead. Everything feels so vivid and genuine, which I really love about your writing!
rosegold1414
I don't want to give any spoilers, but I think the whole scene setup is actually really clever in how it demonstrates family dynamics, even with members who aren't normally in the spotlight. I can definitely expect some ups and downs for her, as people tend to be very judgmental, especially on this topic, which is unfortunate. However, I do hope she has some brief moments where she's excited or proud of what she's been able to accomplish given her resources. More like, 'I did it' when everything was against her.
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rosegold1414
No girl, you did a perfect job building up to that point. I also enjoyed that we’re starting from the beginning with her rather than halfway through. I feel like I do a lot of telling instead of showing, but even from chapter one, it's clear you’re great at showing rather than just outright telling, since we see the family dynamics and get a sneak peek into who she is before the real chaos breaks loose ❤️.
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eyhuff
@rosegold1414 Thank you! I hope I haven’t mislead you into thinking it’s a romance. It’s definitely more about teen pregnancy and small town secrets
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