@freeAngel
no , i do like it and i do understand the switching thing (getting into the head of the man to know how he thinks is totally mah scene ;D, cuz ya know, in real life we, woman, can't do that so hell ya ! i pretty much appreaciate it ! )
now what i don't understand is... well i read it a second time and i just realized that without ya doin' that (like, in the end of the chapter 13 she faints and in the next, the 14 one, she's already stuck with Logan tryin' to run of tha old people) it could have been a bored story .
sorry if mah writing is a mess and hard to understand or if ya dont comprehend any of what I'm blabbing about, let me know if that happens [:
yeah , it's kinda sad but hey ! look to tha happy side : ya can start creating another one for me to read ! muahaha kidding ;p , not only for me, for everyone. im sure they'll like it !
thanks, me too , im glad im enjoying it here, actually im surprised! first time reading english stories ahaha
hmm could ya please give me some advise ?
i dunno which one of your works im gonna start reading next
*hoping ya advise me with romance ones* eheh