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So, I was thinking and... I decided to take down my story til next month. I was reading it I realized it's not as clear or catchy as I thought it would be. Thus, I'll edit it and republish it again on September 1, 2024. I wish I had a more vivid story to share, but I still have no desire to change the plot or the characters so I'll just take some time to refine it and then give you the finished product.
          
          Thanks for staying here and reading Broken Truth despite it's flaws and I look forward to your comments when I republish it.
          
          Til then, Wattpad community

Hi and really sorry for not leaving any messages yesterday. I think we skipped Jay's facts and the preview for the next chapter, but as promised, I posted the 2 chapters for today. Though, the second one was a bit rushed so apologies for any errors.
          
          I hope you will all enjoy them and.....yeah, the preview for the next chapter.
          
          ✓Jay promised Zoe he will 'make it up to her ' so what is he gonna do? And what will happen to Zoe by the end of the day? Will be posted tmr.
          
          ✓The facts for today: Kai basically went through a lot of heavy influence and I'm sure you can tell by now; having tattoos, drinking, and using were all results of his past in which he struggled to make a living for himself and Nina. Speaking of her, the second fact is that Nina met her sisters from the brothel when they went to Kai's club and they promised her a safe place to live in.
          
          I don't think there's anything left to say so I hope you all like this chapter and sorry foe posting it late. Writing it took longer than I expected it to.
          
          Anyways, see ya tomorrow!

Hello and welcome back!
          
          I posted chapter 5 and unfortunately, you  already know the preview so there's no point in saying it again. Though I definitely have some news for ya:
          
          ✓First off, today's fact: Zoe, as mentioned previously, isn't skilled in combat. She might be into the world of illegal and underhanded tricks, but she mostly gets her work done from home or visits trusted people like Kai.
          
          ✓I'm pretty eager to post a character info book so that you can learn more about the people in Broken Truth. I might post it sometime this week. That also means Sunday 5:59 too
          
          ✓Luckily enough, I'm gonna post not 1, but 2! Chapters on Wednesday with one of them being an extra chapter for a small KaixNina romance. (I just ship them a lot in my head, lol)
          
          So, that's about it. Make sure to vote and comment on the last chapter and share your ideas.
          
          Til tomorrow!

Ok, I'm really sorry.
          
          I just read it again and noticed that I gave you the description of chapter 6 and not 5.
          
          Damn it. 
          
          We're just gonna have a little mess around here so I apologize in advance. Though, I doubt anybody is reading this so it's fine.

Hi again,
          
          I just posted chapter 4 and damn, it got even more complicated. I wrote some of the story beforehand so it's hard to edit it. I just read it and that's when I knew it was weird.
          
          Anyways, for anyone who has read it, here's the preview:
          
          Zoe finally, FINALLY, met Jay. She tries her best to ignore him, but he seems persistent. Amidst his attempts, Kai and Nina enter the scene and something unnoticed happens.
          
          PoC (Part of Conversation)
          
          "You're acting all lovey dovey now? Gimme a break, it's only been a day."
          
          What could've happened and where does that leave Zoe and Jay?
          
          Coming up tomorrow!
          
          Ok, this will be our very first fact for today and since it's Nina's chapter, let's start with her.
          
          Fact: Nina actually has Asian origin. She moved to the US with Kai and both of them struggled to make a living for themselves since they were orphans back in their hometown.
          
          Next time, we'll see some things about Zoe so see y'all tomorrow!

Hi and welcome back!
          
          I just posted chapter 3 and I'm not sure about it either, obviously. I tried to make some changes on it to make it simple, but I guess it became even more complicated. Ok, lemme mention some points you should probably know.
          
          ✓The conversations in italics that appear first sure parts of a moment, long after the story is finished. They're snippets that I include to make it a bit more mysterious. If ur wondering in who's pov they'll be, the order is: Zoe, Jay, Kai, Nina. It's gonna change among them so the next chapter is gonna be Nina's.
          
          ✓The ~~~ symbols are for time skips. It's easier to put them for me.
          
          ✓I know our MC STILL hasn't met Jay so it's gonna happen in the next chapter, but not too much.
          
          ✓I'm getting the silly idea of posting facts about my characters after updating the story.
          
          ✓Personally, I don't want to put author notes in the chapters, because that will disturb the flow. I'll post a full chapter for it if needed.
          
          Thanks for reading this and if it's still not clear to you, I'll put some of my favourite stories with their writing style on my reading list and I'm sure it will help if you know this: my story is highly inspired by 13 Reasons Why and My Hero Academia so if you guys know them, it's gonna be a great bonus.
          
          Til tomorrow, bye!

Hi, anyone who's reading this
          
          This isn't an announcement or anything, but I'm trying to journal my progress in here.
          
          So, I've finally published my first book and I keep reviewing it over and over, but it seems as if things are lacking.
          
          Like the prologue. I feel like the hook isn't suspenseful enough and it's too short. The first chapter was ok, but I don't think the characters are introduced well. I wish I could describe them more to you and get you guys familiar with them.
          
          I just posted chap 2 a few minutes ago and I'm still nervous about it. It has too many stuff all jam-packed in it and I'm worried it's terrible.
          
          Thanks for even bothering to read it til here, I appreciate it.
          
          Tomorrow, Chapter 3!