foreshadowing

Hi I'm aspiring poet, can I have feedbacks about my works of poems? Hope you can check it out! 
          
          Link : https://my.w.tt/FhgJqiim95 
          
          Link :https://my.w.tt/LqiBvFTpz5
          
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A lot of thanks for following me ^_^
          I started writing new story.
          I wish u see it and give me advises. 
          Thanks a lot, once more ^_^