Jeevikaviren2718
I love your story
nikku100
Hey, I read ur story it's a good plot. I suggest that u put more description to the story than plot itself. After reading ur story I can tell that u have a clear vision of plot and characters but I am not able to get ur story just to make it more approachable I'm suggested that idea. plz don't take it in the wrong way I'm hoping u get high number of readers for ur story