Heads up, gays! ✨
I just wanted to take a moment to share something with you. I’ve been going through the first ten chapters and refining them a bit— smoothing out clunky bits and adding small, meaningful moments between Feirin and Miss Capri to make their connection feel more authentic.
I’ve also revised Feirin’s voice a bit. I dialed back the old English and extra darkness because I noticed some readers found it overwhelming and it made them want to stop reading. The heart of who she is is still there—just wrapped in words that feel more accessible. The core story stays the same, but these little touches help it flow better, and I’m really proud of how it’s coming together. If you have a spare minute, I’d love for you to revisit those first chapters to see the changes.
But what’s really been on my mind lately is this: we hit 20.8K reads in just one month. I keep replaying that number in my head because I’ve put my whole heart into this story. I’ve spent so many late nights crafting a plot that feels unique, something that’ll make people stop and think—something mind-blowing, if I can pull it off. To see so many of you already reading and engaging with it. It means more than I can say.
Your comments make me smile on days when I need it most, it makes me feel like all that effort isn’t going unnoticed. I hope as more people find it, they’ll appreciate the work that went into making it special.
Thank you so much! More chapters are coming soon—just like I promised. I can’t wait to share what’s next.
Xoxo,
J.
