fairyggukfics

I'm slowly flopping

roseanne_white_10

Vote for a vote? And follow for a follow?
          
          Hi ☺️ sorry for invading ur conversation board. If u have some time just check out my 1st story and let me know your thoughts ☺️ vote and share with ur friends  show me ur support pls  
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/392378429?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=crazy_phoenix_12

Summerrssss

Hello dear,
          I hope you r doing well.
          I'm here to request to check my first book from writing account-sya_Moon_S.
          I kindly request you to check it out and feel free to give me your feedback.
          I'm gonna post chapters soon..
          Thankyou everyone.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/390512684?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=Summerrssss

fairyggukfics

Prologue of "mine and only mine," is published. Don't forget to go check out my other works. I have a lot of books that are in the works so stay tuned for those. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/357737704?utm_source=ios&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details&wp_uname=fairyggukfics

starlightt_ox15000

@fairyggukfics Cover looks stunning- proud of you! ❤
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fairyggukfics

I've come to realize I'm not getting any reader's for my books. I don't know if people are even seeing my books. I don't even know how many people are on wattpad ive seen ongoing books that have more readers than me. I'm starting to believe my stories are boring. I'm not trying to bore people I promise that I'll add exited things in my books. I sometimes will forget my account from time to time. But please check out my books.

starlightt_ox15000

@fairyggukfics Alright, I'm going to tell you this (which is not typical in books). I realized you have your text in the center instead of the left side, it's more ideal if you switch it onto the left side. Also when charaters are talking, you aren't actually supposed to put it in a paragraph. 
            
            It should be like this for ex: 
            
            "Hey!" (name)
            
            "Hey!" (Another name) 
            
            That's mainly the change you have to make otherwise it should be good hopefully. ❤
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fairyggukfics

Tysm I've been a trying to get more detailed with them I've believe I'm getting better I used Grammarly for one chapter and I enjoyed it. So I appreciate the help. Let me know if my stories are missing anything. : )
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starlightt_ox15000

@fairyggukfics Sorry to hear hear that, I've only been here since the 26th of last month so I don't know how I already have around 55 views. The only people I told about my book was my sis and her bf, but I'd love to read one of yours books in my free time after I get done reading my current one. I suggest you could do what they recommend for you to write about. It's important to have a exposition, rising action, climax, falling action and a composition. That'll get the just of your transitions within chapters. Even use strong word choice like good vocabulary. Third, probably try to make it detailed as possible so the reader gets a image of what they're reading. I hope that helps. ❤
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