fairyshouyo
holiii, he terminado una historia sushibeom pero aún me falta pasarla a digital y editar. tal vez esté para este fin de año, como regalo. esta vez, prometo sí cumplir.
fairyshouyo
fairyshouyo
Lol, prometí actualizar pero adivinen quién se enfermó y tiene un burnout :D
fairyshouyo
My roommate and I keep comenting on sushibeom, on how doomed they are and about my stories & my ideas. She kind of helps me to decide what to write next, but sometimes i wish she was more a beta reader (or a writer) than just somebody i can talk abt my fixation.
fairyshouyo
@ayalii Ayaaaa T__T omg, you def should write smth!! at leats, give it some try. And about me, yeah, i know abt that, it's actually because i cannot think —or i don't want to— about the afterward. Mainly because i like that kind of endings, and two, because writing more than just a OS it's so exhausting to me. BUTTTTT, i'll try to improve and make better endings. THX SM FOR EVERYTHING.
ayalii
@ fairyshouyo I'm not a writer (I want to write, but I'm not confident or motivated at the moment), but if I can give you some advice as a reader, you write very well about angst, the lead-up to a relationship, and the individual personalities of the characters, but there's a lack of development afterward. In two of your one-shots, the story stops right after the reconciliation and the confession of feelings, and I would have liked to see more.