Loving your stories so far, specially the concepts of it all. Although, there are minimal faults when it comes to spelling, grammar, proper punctuations and basically the transitions of scenes, as a long time wattpad reader (i have read A LOT of stories) i can say that yours are quiet promising. Keep writing!!! Keep improving!!Maybe do a little proof read of your chaps and yeah! You're doing good. Malayo ang maaring marating ng stories mo!! Goodluck!