falalaladays0

Hey everyone! counting down the days til Avatar 3 Fire and Ash! In the meantime I finished editing "This is our Home" and I'm trying to respond to y'alls comments (I've been inactive sorry) Have a good day/night!!!

THEYLUVBLAYKE

Hey I wanted to know if you didn’t mind if you could read my new chapter and give me constructive criticism, if you don’t mind ofc!!

falalaladays0

hi! I read it, it’s very good and I love the use of the navi language in the chapter! 
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THEYLUVBLAYKE

Hello I wanted to know if you would mind reading the first chapter of my new book and help me make corrections to it. If you don't mind ofc

falalaladays0

it is good!! is it the plot of avatar (1st movie)?
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THEYLUVBLAYKE

Hello I wanted to know if you could read The new chapter of my book and help me make corrections to it. It feels somewhat Cheesy and bad in some parts and I don’t know if it’s just me or if I should rewrite it completely 

falalaladays0

I think it’s actually very good, not cheesy at all. You also gave the main character cute interactions with everyone which is always nice! 
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THEYLUVBLAYKE

Hello, I recently Read her book This is our home and I would like to use some inspiration from it for my new book, “from another world”. Is that alright with you? As long as I give credit

falalaladays0

thanks for the love on my book 
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