Hi!
I've been reading The Search for Lily Myers, and I just had to say it's one of the best written stories I've seen on Wattpad. And I've been here for years!
The characters are not at all one-dimensional (they don't exist solely for some role in a plot), the dialogues are EXTREMELY natural (like HOW are they so smooth), and the plot developments are sound, logical, and unpredictable (chef's kiss).
You're also doing an amazing job at showing instead of telling! I could really feel Amelia speaking and living out her life instead of narrating it plainly for us. Even though it's in 3rd POV, you have already topped a wide range of 1st POV stories when it comes to personal voice and intimacy with characters, and to me that is such an difficult feat to achieve.
Have I also gushed about Amelia and Henry yet? They're super adorable and pure that it's making my heart swell with love. Their interactions are also setting my own standards higher, and now you're basically making me want a guy like Henry myself ;)
I'm only halfway through, but I'm so excited to read your other works already! I could tell you work really hard on them and that each chapter was delicately written with a lot of thought.
Thank you so much for writing and sharing your stories with us -- I can't stress this enough.
Just from your characters alone, I could already be *sure* you're a very empathetic person yourself, and that just inspires me to be better at being one too. <3