I am not updating my story.. almost 3 months I guess? But thanks for its readers. It already reached 1k without me updating lmao. I'll probably update this week.
Hello po! If you have time you can read my story entitled 'Roadtrip' its a mystery-thriller with a bit of romance story which you can enjoy!
Here's the link: https://my.w.tt/sqdhESBoqS
Synopsis:
"Handa ka na ba para sa ROADTRIP?"
Tawanan. Biruan. Halakhakan. Harutan.
Iyan ang makikita mo sa loob ng kanilang van. Masayang pinagplanuhan ng bawat isa. Ngunit makatawa pa kaya pagkatapos nilang malaman ang lihim na nakakubli sa Mort Village?
Nagkayayaan lang upang magbonding pero anyare? Nakatuklas sila ng sikretong malagim.
Join Lyre and her friends as they discover the hidden mysteries about Mort Village.
Hi. I've added more compositions to my newly published book 'Poetry Themes'. Feel free to read, vote and leave comments. Any reaction will be appreciated. :-) Thanks!
I know that you're in need of some help in your story. And if you want to improve just give it a try in my critique shop.
Here's the link: https://my.w.tt/sgYgeNu7UR
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☑ Exposition
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☑ Conclusion
☑ Phasing
☑ Narration:
☑ Spelling and Grammar
☑ Show vs. Tell
☑ Choice of words
☑ Style
☑ POV
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☑ Character Development
☑ Dialogue
☑ Strengths and Weaknesses
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