Ok rant time: I'm thankful for comments on my stories, and constructive criticism can be nice, but please don't try and tell me what to do with my story. In the end I am the one writing it, and telling me what to do, especially on a completed work, is unfair to me. I am probably well aware of inconsistencies, mistakes, or plot holes, and pointing them out doesn't make you superior or smarter, it makes you kinda rude. A lot of my old works are embarrassing to me since I've improved a lot since I wrote them originally, but I keep them up since people enjoy reading them. Please don't drive me to take them down, and don't rehash old mistakes, especially on works that have been completed for like two years!!! Thanks