@Susina_Plisetsky hey, so I've read your Hunk x reader, and I have a few tips!
-every time the dialogue switches between people, start a new paragraph. It makes it much easier for the reader to distiguish which character is speaking at that time
-proofread your story a couple of times before publishing, making sure there are minimal mistakes in dialogue and contractions
-make sure you use punctuation properly, putting commas in the right place, and know when to start a new sentence
-try to remember the difference between 'your' and 'you're'. It looks so much more professional when you know how to use those correctly. 'Your' is referring to possession, while 'you're' is a contraction of 'you' and 'are', signaling an action or describing someone. Example: You're doing a wonderful job! Your hair looks amazing today!
-if you need to, have someone who is older than you, or a friend, proofread your story before publishing
-make sure that you are using the right spellings of homophones, because that can totally change a sentence. One of the ones I noticed was 'complement'. That word means to balance out. Compliment is to say something positive about another person
-avoid using too many time skips, and try to add more detail going off of what was exactly in the episode
Those are all of my tips that I have to give. I cannot wait for the next part!
-Zoe✌
