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Could you give my story a read? I'm looking for any advice! Would be most appreciated ;)

"Liam walked through the hall of school and thinking about his conversation with that Nina-girl that had occurred yesterday. He ..." http://wattpad.com/story/1859725

"First Niam fic (yay) it’s completely AU, and I’m not sure how it will work out, but I hope you’ll like it. Kiss :*
          
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@mowlrules I liked Tate! But I liked Beatrice more. My favorites are Beatrice and Fifth Harmony!

Do I LIKE the X Factor? No. I LOVE The X Factor. Diamond White, Fifth Harmony, CARLY ROSE, BEATRICE MILLER .... Oh my god, they are just perfect. I wish a teen won * I love Beatrice* but Tate was good too. X FACTOR ALL THE WAY! :D

@mowlrules Hahahaha :P. You like X Factor too?
          I love Beatrice :D

OH MY GOD! When I found out you were writing a X Factor story, I screamed one exiciment! MY BEATRICE MILLER HEART OH. GOD MY FANGIRLING SKILLS OH MY GOSH I LOVE YOU X FACTOR X FACTOR X FACTOR

@fanfics please read my CIMORELLI FAN FICTION! :)
          http://www.wattpad.com/11658882-you-give-me-wings-a-cimorelli-story
          vote/comment/fan me please? Pretty please?

@iinfinitybeyond, I will read every chapter after exams :D. I seriously love your story :D

@ChristineNguyen860 I will read it now :D