Hey! This is booksarelife148, we took a look at your first chapter! First I'd like to give you props that it was a decently long chapter, short chapters aren't as entertaining! We loved the time set/situation you went with, something fresh and new that the original books didn't reveal to us from that perspective! One thing we did notice however, is that a lot of it was a re-tell of the originals series. If you're reading that you should've already have read the series, so that was a bit of a bore for those of us who have! Also mention that it coukd contain spoilers! :) Although we understand because it was the first chapter, it has to have some explanatory :). You have a lot of potential, keep writing, update quickly! It's in our library's ;)
