AldeniaMayers

Will u ever come back and finish my boyfriend is my girlfriend

fanfreakout3

@AldeniaMayers thank you. I trust ure judgment buuut I'm not ever fixing those errors.. I just don't have the time lol. Thank you for the feedback much appreciated ✌️
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AldeniaMayers

@AldeniaMayers im 21 and yes it does need editing but not major just minor spelling errors and wrong use of words that sort of thing 
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fanfreakout3

@AldeniaMayers actually.. Do you think my story has alot of editing needed? Because someone has mentioned that the story is well written but has alot of editing needed... Do you think I could just leave it like this or does it need serious editing lol.. Also how old are you lol.. Just so I could take your criticism seriously 
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