fantomred19

I feel like after camp cretaceous everyone's eating schedule was crap bc they were basically starving every day in jurassic park so I can imagne like them having a gc and being like at 2:00 'yall eat yet' everyone responds with 'sht. No?' 

sergeanthunterx

So sorry for the delay, I was very busy, but I finally read The Glitch like you asked, and I totally love your idea! From the side effects of her enhancements to the bond with the other clones, they're all great! All I really have to say is probably split up the dialogue a bit and make it easier to tell who's speaking, but other than that, it's amazing! :D

fantomred19

@sergeanthunterx thank you I'll try to do that
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