I don't know what you think when reading my fics, but sometimes when I'm reading someone else's I find it hard to go through the same thoughts that the main protagonist is feeling. For example, when they ruin an 'arranged' relationship by pretending that their 'lover' loves them back or complaining about how they don't love them back, they legit forget that it's an ARRANGED relationship. I understand moping around even, but what do they really expect? Love at first sight with a whiny, immature baby who can't get a grip of reality?