byunbeee

Hallo kakak cantik dan ganteng minta sarannya dong buat cerita pertama aku.
          
          Bagian 1  https://my.w.tt/j4knDTYoqN
          
          Bagian 2  https://my.w.tt/rYr1oks5rN
          
          Jangan lupa komen dan bantu vote nya yaa
          Karna saran dari kalian sangat membantu kedepannya

fatima-gilani

@byunbeee english .. sorry i cannot get what you are saying 
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theseoulbae

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