Hello, I'm writing in response to your question on my message board. First, I want to thank you for trusting me with your work for the awards. It's no easy thing to hand over one's work to be scrutinized by a stranger. Unfortunately, I no longer provide comprehensive reviews on Wattpad. As with any creative work, I wholly believe there's always room for improvement, but as to what those areas are specifically, it's subjective in the eyes of the beholder. Instead, I think the best piece of advice I can offer up is to read professionally edited works constantly, and to read the genre you hope to write. Personally, I'm a writer who believes that reading teaches us more than any class or reviewer can. I wish you luck in your future endeavors, and once again congratulations on your win!