feirfyre

I reread my first chapter and felt like it was in dire need of editing as so many points didn't make sense so I made quite a few changes, so do read its different from the previous first chapter. None of the other chapter are changed, so it won't affect the plot till now but it will affect the upcoming post as the story develops. So I recommend you read it to avoid confusion.

feirfyre

I reread my first chapter and felt like it was in dire need of editing as so many points didn't make sense so I made quite a few changes, so do read its different from the previous first chapter. None of the other chapter are changed, so it won't affect the plot till now but it will affect the upcoming post as the story develops. So I recommend you read it to avoid confusion.

chocoloco_lava

Hy! I hope you're doing well! I would really appreciate it if you would give my book a read.
          It's name is "Doomsday", still in its starting phase. You can deny the request as well.♥️
          Thank you!
          Stay safe ⭐

chocoloco_lava

@feirfyre sure sweetie!! And thank you again♥️
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feirfyre

@chocoloco_lava sure would love to try it. Do give me your review on my book stolen. 
            And stay safe❤️
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