cloversgotanidea
Hey, so I read the first chapter of When Nobody's Watching, and it's pretty good. The only thing I'd recommend for future reference was to subtly hint at Johnathon's feelings throughout the first couple of chapters to give room for tension
ferchuQQ
@cloversgotanidea Hey, thanks for taking the time to read it and leave a comment. I appreciate the note — it’s actually a good point. I want to sit with it a bit and think about how to weave those hints in better. Most people don’t give feedback at all, so I really value that you did.
