@Simplyhoot definetly! I love your story! Your writing technique is really good and I like your style. It's great that you're posting up stories now! :) I also like your description. Though personally I'm not a huge fan of student/teacher relationship stories, I'll put that fact aside and say that your story definitely has potential! I really like it :) Just don't forget to add spaces in the paragraph every now and then! Keep up the great work and keep writing! :)