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i was trying to rewrite "just for you" right before i got busy, and i just couldnt get the beginning right. i know people liked the story because of the tropes, the mystique, and the straight-to-the-point storytelling with a little bit of guessing here and there. but i really really dislike the way the story was written (⁠╥⁠﹏⁠╥⁠)
          	
          	for instance, i wanted there to be more establishment of FL's original situation in the "perfect" world. like: the friends she had, the way people treated her, the worries and dreams she held etc. but it's really tough to get this part in without boring the reader. i know everyone just wants to read the part where the fl goes crazy and falls in love with rui but i wish i had a way to make everything more impactful without drawing away the original readership  i know some will appreciate the better writing (like for "if only, once again") but there is just something about the plot in "just for you" that has an indescribable charm. 
          	
          	anyway, ill keep thinking of what to do about this! hopefully by november ill have some results to show. i hope that in my remastered version of this truly precious fic, i can give new life to both the y/n and rui in this story!