eharrysyles

HEY! Heard you enjoy werewolf, alpha, romace and mystery!
          THERE IS ALSO ONE DIRECTION BOOKS I MAKE!
          
          Why not check this out?
          LMK what you think!!
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/390531228-when-alpha-met-a-woman

ffll12

@eharrysyles hi! thx!
            I'm kind of new to the genre - I'm trying to look for stories I like outside the HP fandom (I'm a major Potterhead)
            anyway I'll check it out!
            p.s. I'll appreciate it if you check my stories out (I need a lot of constructive criticism *awkward face*)
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TheLostBoys333

Hi! Figured here would be easier for continuing any conversation than in the comments on my story. I've read "Perfectly Imperfect" and, before I give any kind of feedback, what kind of help were you hoping for? Where do you feel you need or would like help in the story and your writing? I'm more than happy to give some feedback, but it's easier for me if I know what you have in mind. :)

TheLostBoys333

@ffll12 Will do as soon as I can :)
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ffll12

@TheLostBoys333 okay, thanks! would you mind also taking a look at "another pair of green eyes"?
            (Severus ended up with Lily after all, and Harry is still a Potter but has a half-sister called Eileen Lily Prince - the daughter of Severus and Lily)
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Hadiya044

Well darling I have fought for that space and as I say I don’t love or respect anybody just because they share blood with me.It is a matter of give and take.
          

Hadiya044

@ffll12 Completed 16 years on this  
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Hadiya044

Hey there is an update girl. Do not forget to comment.
          

ffll12

@Hadiya044 *sending hug through screen*
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BunnyGirlHP

Girl are you alive? it’s been like two weeks and I’m worried about you

ffll12

@BunnyGirlHP don't worry girl
            dying in not included in my plans for the near future (famous last words lol)
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BunnyGirlHP

@ffll12 oh good, was just worried. hope stuff lightens up for you <3
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ffll12

@BunnyGirlHP lmao yes
            I'm just swamped, that's all
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