Gingerbread713

I don't have enough words to tell you how much you did good with your story. It was amazing, everything. From plot to storyline, to dialogues to characters , everything was perfect. You have a beautiful way with words. The way you potrayed Asami's emotions, I absolutely love it. Outstanding. 
          You should write more. I bet you'll rock it.

Gingerbread713

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ficinthefinder

@Gingerbread713 This is lovely! I'm so glad you enjoyed my story. I loved writing it. I love sensei's beautiful characters and am happy you thought I did them justice. Thank you for taking the time to write to me. It means a lot!
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Gingerbread713

I don't have enough words to tell you how much you did good with your story. It was amazing, everything. From plot to storyline, to dialogues to characters , everything was perfect. You have a beautiful way with words. The way you potrayed Asami's emotions, I absolutely love it. Outstanding. 
          You should write more. I bet you'll rock it.

Kara-chan4ever

is there going to be a second part for your story?
          p.s. very good story I liked it very much and the only thing(from my point of view)that can make it better would be some mpreg maybe(-;
          I mean akihiko likes kids very much ,right?
          is your book and you can make anything you want ,can't wait to read more:-D

ficinthefinder

@Kara-chan4ever Ah, thank you! That's lovely!
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Kara-chan4ever

u  really are a good author at first I thought it was just some "didn't have anything better to do" book but the way u write is very descriptive and the plot was some good stuff:`-))
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Kara-chan4ever

So very glad to have read this book!!
            Si no chance for some mpreg....fine but u'll have to come up with something good author-chan.Can't wait!!!:-D
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thenameislynn

Huge fan of VF here! I LOVE your story! It was a good read. I can barely see any grammar or spelling mistakes. So it was a breeze to read. Now I cant wait for the next chapter of the actual VF to come out. The suspense is killing me!

thenameislynn

And I've dowloaded your story via archive of our own. Its in my ePub :)
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thenameislynn

@edwinaworth bahahahaha!! "Aki to get some pants on". Omg thats hilarious!! Luckily he traded that frying pan with a gun aye? Lol!
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ficinthefinder

@thenameislynn Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. I absolutely loved writing it. I love this couple so much. Sensei has created two individuals who have very unique strengths and weaknesses. You wouldn't think they would work together but they do, beautifully and it makes for such great angsty writing opportunities! I love Asami, of course, but Akihito is my precious darling baby and I just want him to be happy. So I too am desperately waiting for the next chapter. I need both of them to get safely off that roof and for Aki to get some pants on. Thank you for taking the time to read my story and to write to me!
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