@finny13 being descriptive isn't bad, it depends on how you use it. You can describe a person to give a good visual of a person like "her long Butterscotch blonde hair cascaded down to her lower back." You don't have to describe much just important details like the main Characters, sub Characters and setting. But don't spend a whole paragraph or few paragraphs describing a door or Cake. "He opened the door" is all you need.