Hi Fiona! It's damemirabele from the r4r group.
I just finished reading your story and trust me, all the chapters are really interesting. The way you structured everything and put it into writing, I truly enjoyed it. I’d love to keep reading once new chapters are updated. Aurora would definitely be loved by everyone on Earth, I guess ☺️.
On the other hand, I noticed just a few minor mistakes, especially with tautology. For example: "top/on", "bit/little" — you could just go with one instead of both. So maybe go through it again to spot those. There were also some slight sentence structure issues, but they’re not really obvious.
I’ll be looking forward to the next chapter. I can’t wait!!