I'm writing my first story. I figured it was about time to do something creative, and write the story I always wanted to.  Any comments, positive or negative would be appreciated (Once I've finished the first chapter). Or if anybody has any hints (Like stop writing) then let me know.

So for those who know me or want to know me, I'm a sucker for a romance novel. Books have always been my love, that and music. I've never had the perfect relationship, maybe thats why I love books so much. They seem to take you a place where you aren't yourself, and reality is so much further away.

I love music, rock music mainly. My favourite bands being Twin Atlantic, Biffy Clyro, Foo Fighters, Young Guns & You Me At Six.
But I will try to give anything a listen (except dance music, that stuff, well I would rather not).