firennice

I am making a major change to the story.  After listening to the discussions of some authors and holding a few discussions of my own, I see the need to age them up. 
          	14-15-16 might be traditional in fantasy of years past, and historically as well.  But there is too much of an ick factor, and other issues of dealing with stories with more adult themes with children, or young teens. So I am moving them up in the 17-18 year old age.  That makes it more compelling in some ways.  However it also means a lot of cleaning up old chapters.  I am through chapter 2 and will work my way through it now.

firennice

I am making a major change to the story.  After listening to the discussions of some authors and holding a few discussions of my own, I see the need to age them up. 
          14-15-16 might be traditional in fantasy of years past, and historically as well.  But there is too much of an ick factor, and other issues of dealing with stories with more adult themes with children, or young teens. So I am moving them up in the 17-18 year old age.  That makes it more compelling in some ways.  However it also means a lot of cleaning up old chapters.  I am through chapter 2 and will work my way through it now.

Tinaw82

Hi would you like t check out my story veins of iron. It's a slow burn romance with fantasy and politics. I'm a new writer and would love to get your feedback!! 
          
          I read the summary, of your story and will start it soon, have added it to my list. 
          
          Would you be interested in v4v or r4r?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/395969747?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Tinaw82

firennice

@Tinaw82 I added it to my reading list. And will check it out soon
• Reply