fkwkxn

Hello y'all, I rewrote the chapter one because my sleep deprived mind missed a few points, there's still a few mistakes but hopefully its clearer. Hope you guys enjoy!! :) 

TylerBaker623

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Like how you're doing when he goes back in time or something like that but I think it'd be really cool for Harry to go back in time maybe make up a character but he doesn't go to school or if he does he goes undercover I think it'd be really cool for him to stand against friend of all but you know take the Elder Wand away but he's still fighting the war and great secret bunkers are basically the ministry trying to find out who he is and us and England I think it'd be really cool I mean I've always agreed that magic is magic so I kind of felt that it was Dumb and Harry Potter if they would bastis dark people that use dark magic I'm sorry but dark magic is healthy up into a point I think it'd be really cool for Hermione to go back in time because I think of Hermione would have been bad ass I'm sorry but if she was not friends with Harry Ron I think she would have been bad ass something really cool for her to go back in time to time but maybe go to a different school one that is I think it'd be really cool for Patronus to be a dragon but her animagus to be something practical a barn owl some type of bird maybe a crane something that will help her get away or maybe you seen it but a different maybe a white Phoenix or and yang Phoenix this is always what I thought and basically I want her to be so badass if she does not put up with if your butt crack face that I want her to be a descendant of every call and have a seat on the board of the Sacred twenty-eight or something but make make it known that she is muggle-born that she does not care what these people think because I always kind of thought that Hermione let Draco Malfoy said and she never put him in his place except for like that one time when she punched him and that was it I thought that was super bad ass but I want some more

TylerBaker623

Thanks for the suggestion I'm having trouble finding it I'm trying to search is the book called cookies with caramel or is there like an Arthur or like what's his profile of her profile I can't really seem to find it on what side and it's getting really frustrating because I want to read it all so if you go on my added list because I usually follow a lot of HP I do have one that is Harry Potter time travel and it's like other books is but it's kind of like other books he has to fight Grindelwald I will say if you do like all night like rain book list you'll see quite a bit of stuff that I usually have on my bucket list I usually don't follow and less like I know that they're going to update because I don't want to follow somebody and you know they just stopped updating and then like my reader the people that you know book to my list to find stuff to read and then they just they read the book and they like it and they can't keep reading it so hopefully you're not like that I hopefully you do I will have these are some of my ideas I think it'd be really cool

TylerBaker623

Thank you for updating the book that was updated I think 50 minutes ago I've been really wanting you to update on I love your but there's not a lot of Harry Potter that we're he does go back in time to the times of Grindelwald or or Tom Riddle Sarah I've not seen that a lot and I mean I just and it's not really long book so hopefully you make this book very long because I think it'd be really cool to explore hog work and outside of Hogwarts

fkwkxn

@TylerBaker623 also, its not a time travel one but I really recommend the Harry Potter book called "..." by cookieswithcaramel. Its so freakin good despite the weird cover and lack of info. The grammar, writing and story are *chefs kiss*
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fkwkxn

@TylerBaker623 Thanks!!! It's so nice to hear that and I completely agree! There aren't many books on the time travel but I've definitely fallen in love with the concept and the ones I have found. My favourites make up most of my list in Tomarry so hopefully there might be one in there you haven't read and will enjoy. Here to help a fellow tomarry time travel friend out! Honestly, hope I was helpful and I'm so glad you like my story
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fkwkxn

I'm just publishing completed chapters that are in my drafts. I don't want them to go to waste cause I spent time and effort on them, although I probably won't be updating them.
          
          A lot of these are just story ideas but I hope you guys enjoy
          
          

fkwkxn

@fkwkxn sorry about the confusion, I accidently posted the unfinished draft chapters which were just notes and after thoughts that didn't make sense without context. I might pick up the story and finish the drafted ideas 
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Catacone

@fkwkxn Where did the other chapters go? My notifications says that you posted 10 chapters.
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fkwkxn

Sorry about delays in publishing new chapters! 
          I swear I have most of the plot created, im just struggling to put it into words. I'm also really busy and currently working on a project that takes up a lot of my time.
          Thank you for those who actually like my book, and I'm going to work more on it during the holidays.
          You guys are amazing and I hope you guys have a great Christmas! ❤️✨

fkwkxn

Mortal Souls is back!
          Huge changes have been made to try and make the story flow better and I'm proud to say the chapters will now be around 3.5-4k in length. I'm sorry for any slow updates.
          Hope you enjoy! 

GraceCayford

@fkwkxn it's alright. Take your time
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fkwkxn

@GraceCayford I'm really sorry for the long pause, I'm planning to publish a chapter by the end of next week. 
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GraceCayford

@fkwkxn when will you update again?
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