flippingheck

@NerdFighterForLife Trouble's my second name :P And yes, I certainly saw what you did there :P Jolly good chuckle I had.

No problem! Haha you would've been in so much trouble if I were a boy..grrr.
          Ignore my fail attempt at trynna talk like a guy. But well it's your lucky day; I'm not a boy. Tough it would be so flipping cool if I were! Haha see what I did there? ^_^

@NerdFighterForLife Hahaha, didn't even notice :P Ramble all you like, I don't mind :P

Oh wait. I just realized I said no worries, and so did you. Whoops. Ignore that and read on, cause at just makes it awkward. 
          And I'm rambling again, so yeah. :)

@flippingheck No worries! I won't lie, at first I was like, ouch. But then I realized you were right and one of those people who actually read something and don't just comment so others can do the same! Well enough of me rambling on. All in all, I didn't take it in a negative way and am really glad you took the time out to point out my mistakes. :)

@NerdFighterForLife No worries. :) I was concerned I was a little harsh :P Glad to see it wasn't taken that way :)

Thanks a lot for those suggestions. They have really got me thinking. I will go through the chapter and try to put more action. Thanks a lot for the advice. Much appreciated. :)

Messed around with AWH: Thaneship. Take a look at the edits and see if you like the changes. Added a whole new scene, check it out! :)