@TheStyclarSaga haha, I just finished voting for all the chapters too :D
I really did love it, your characters had some real depth to them. It wasn't like "Oh I did this" or "I ate" you actually had a lot of detail and you could tell a lot of effort was put into the book. You made every character, good or bad, hard to not like. Amazing job again! xx
I know a winner when I see one, and yours is definitely it. You should enter it into the Watty Awards this year, you'd have an awesome shot.