Lexia

Hello ^^.
          Pls don't take this the wrong way. I just felt like I should try to help you on this.
          
          You see you make really good ideas and plots. But their one issue I have, and that's the writing part. Like instead of like
          P: I told you so
          It should be like
          "See u told you so!".
          . 
          Now I like the Grammer! I truly do, you just gotta work transitions and not going all over the place.
          
          Now please don't take any offense to this! 
          I have also done these mistakes aswell when I first wrote my story. 
          But like I said, I'd like to help you figure that iut :>.
          Thx u for reading ^^

...Welp...guess I know got a new chapter to write in screaming halls.  Man that night terror...was... something else......

Bruh why is it my 2 favorite series (tbhk and murder drones) just released the saddest updates ever.
          
          Istg these 2 series are gonna be the reason I go back to grippy socks

Also got my head in a whirl whether uzi and doll will find out the entire truth and origin of their parents and AS. And could Uzi and Doll team up and end it all for good. Also curious if Uzi could control the sentinals since they didn't attack her immediately but smelled something familiar aka the similar scent of their creator. 
          
          But aside from the negative, I really loved how Tessa was so excited to see N. And uzi's reaction to a human was to bite Tessa . Also the transition of Uzi putting her wings back was awesome, lost track of how many times I replayed that part other than the nuzi scene. Also it was incredible to see uzi be able to fly with N. 
          
          I honestly cannot wait for ep 7 and if it's not released by next month, Liam and GLITCH will get a REAL good talking to by me and the fandom. And years later when someone discovers murder drones and the series is already complete they're gonna be really lucky not to grow through the agony of waiting with that kind of pain. 
          
          Pt.2

Murder Drones ep 6 spoliers⚠️
          
          Anyone else ready to go on a spree towards GLITCH for what they did to V. 
          
          I didn't really like V but she didn't deserve that kind of an ending r.i.p. V and hopefully you can be recloned. 
          
          It's now also clear Uzi and N clearly have feelings for each other, but are too scared/nervous to admit it. Which conflicts my feelings of whether N will actually off Uzi for the sale of the universe, or try to save her and the rest instead. I know Uzi would try to save the others. 
          
          But also still conflicted with Nori and Yeva. Nori seemed to be the creator of sentinals and Yeva in 1 frame seemed to be in pain from AS. It also just raises more questions of how/what Nori was truly like. And what will they find down in the fever labs.
          
          I read one of the comments on ep 6 which also got me thinking. N did immensely care for V and had a crush on her. So just how will N react to Uzi now? V's last words were "Uzi I trust you". So will that have N hating Uzi and blaming her for her death and become distant and cold, or will he mourn V's death and cling on to Uzi for support since throughout the episode we see that Uzi has become better at being supportive and caring towards N and even V (as well as V growing kinder and less cold). And now that N knows her feelings and she knows his. Will it bring them closer or more apart. 
          
          Pt.1

Hi! How are you? :)

Do you write anymore on here???(also just so you know I did an edit thingy and I was reacting to one is that okay with you I gave you credit and everything!...)

Marco Polo (my dog/brother)
          2006-7/22/2023 11:15-11:30am
          May he rest in peace and enjoy exploring heaven as well as reunite with my mom and his brothers and sisters ️

Update in daughter of Lord no.7 and no.8

Update:
          
          Been a few days and after talking to a few friends about it,  I think I've been able to put the puzzle pieces together of why he actually broke up with me, but the answer isn't pleasing and breaks the 2nd vow he made me.
          
          He made me 2 vows, 1. He would always stick with me even as friends if we broke up. 2. He would not let his mother break us up. 
          
          For the 2 weeks he couldn't talk to me it was because he got grounded. And the day he got grounded was RIGHT AFTER talking to me. And when I had visited him to give him some ramen I made him to cheer him up, he was in fear of getting near me because of his mother.... specifically scared to be near ME...then once he's finally ungrounded after 2 weeks NO CONTACT with me other than that one visit. He breaks up with me. But during the call he also sounded rush, and the memory replaying in my head...his voice is his masked voice of no emotion (keeping it together or at least trying) usually up when his mom is around. Now when I went to his house and explained to his mom what had happened and that I was just there to explain my side she said quote unquote "you called him a traitor, words hurt *my name*". NOW KEEP THAT INFO IN MIND. HOW TF DOES SHE KNOW?! Xavier NEVER goes to her for ANYTHING personal, he's too scared to. Which means SHE WAS THERE. And here's what confirms my theory, she also said and I can confidently quote "I'll be the one to decide whether you two can be friends". Putting those pieces together. It clicked...She FORCED Xavier to break up with me against his will. Since they're moving and she LOATHES me and my family ( I have not a fucking clue why, the women just absolutely hated my family and most especially me and my dad, painted me as a no good and my dad as a pervert and peto behind our backs and Xavier told me about how bad he felt with her doing that ) she wanted him to leave me behind as well.