setphaserstostunning

Also, thank you ever so much for starting to read Deadlies! :) I hope you'll enjoy it :) I also have a few other completed stories, such as Willa & the Extraordinary Internship, and All This Time (there is also an almost completed spinoff called Bitter Brews).

fluoraescence

 Extraordinary Internship but I've already read Bitter Brews and All This Time. How else would I fangirl over Charlotte and Wolf and Babe and Levi?
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setphaserstostunning

Hi Rae! Thanks so much for your support toward Silver Stilettos :)
          
          Thank you for going back to vote, it means so much to writers to know that readers are enjoying their work, and it really helps the story move up in the rankings of the Hot List (essentially, the more support a story receives, the higher the story rises, and the more readers can find it!) :)

fluoraescence

Wow...the story makes a lot more sense now! Thanks a lot for replying!
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setphaserstostunning

@IncomparablyPerfect and I really welcome hearing feedback from readers, especially when its as constructive as yours has been! Sincerely, thank you <3 I'm very pleased to know that you're as keen to see the story published as I am! :) I really value everything you have to say.
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setphaserstostunning

@IncomparablyPerfect oh my gosh, I just noticed that you replied to me here (I also received and replied to your message but your comment reply here has some different feedback). Yeah, I see how Matt and Lenox could appear a little two-dimension at the start of the story—possibly even Dom and Fen, at least at first!
            
            Your suggestions for Matt are very helpful, thank you! :) I really like how you analyzed each of the characters, but I think for Lenox, at least, it'd be really hard to show her true colors. Mayuri always perceived her as being shallow and silly, and when we as the readers see Lenox change after all the awful things that have happened, that's something Mayuri doesn't get to see because she's not there. I kind of thought of it like this: Chapters 1-26 are mostly all about Mayuri, because Reed's claims of her life being in danger only affected her. The other characters knew nothing about this and were unaffected until the last couple of chapters when they were held hostage and FORCED to be involved. So the epilogue serves to show how they grew from that point on, which Mayuri could never know. Does that make sense? I feel like that all sounded kind of confusing! haha
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