Lianna

I finished reading what you wrote. It's both heartfelt and brutally honest. With the fixing of a few minor spelling and punctuation errors, you could easily have something here that would make people think. And they should.
          
          Sort of like the whole "What if the cure for cancer is trapped in the mind of someone who can't afford an education" thing, your writing can be thought provoking.
          
          Keep it up. Keep writing. And keep improving.

Of* I swear I will never get used to this little keyboard lol

I really like how you juxtaposed constellations with schoolmates. In all my years of writing, I never thought if that.