Sobrang natatawa talaga ako dun sa writer na tinutukoy ko. May nagcocorrect kasi ng grammar niya, actually, madaming nagcocorrect. Ang sabi, "Wag ka na mag english ok lang naman (something like that)." HAHAHA. Siya pa ang may gana magalit. If she can't handle criticism, she needs to leave this website and write her stories at Pantasya. Hahahaha. Stupid author. Wag ka pong palengkera mang-away. Don't be childish. Diba mature ka na? Kaya nga lahat ng ka horny-han mo, pinopost mo na eh. Accept criticism. Trust me. I've learned about it the hard way. Hahaha. I can't believe na may mga babae palang ganyan ka ano, hanggang Wattpad, pinopost. Worst of all, I can't even accept it as a story. Purely sex related and it's not even freaking good! Damn. Why are you doing this to me. I hate ranting and criticizing but I have no choice! You're story writing is just worthy of a critic like me! LOL