flynnolium

Yeesh I just reread Kings Racetrack from the beginning to make sure I wasn’t leaving anything out and.. ew the first two chapters are ROUGH. The temptation I have to rewrite them is INSANE. But at the same time I kinda wanna leave them alone because it shows my progress between 2022-2024 quite a lot.. I’d like to think I’ve improved enough 
          	
          	But UGH WHY DID I WRITE LIKE THAT???

flynnolium

The urge to rewrite chapters 1 and 2 of Kings Racetrack is STRONG again. I just saw newsies live at a local theatre and my brain is buzzing to write. Instead of idk WRITING THE NEXT CHAPTER I instead just wanna demolish the first two chapters and maybe the 3rd. I wanna try and explain what I was trying to get across better, especially the Brooklyn and Midtown stuff because 2022 me was just babbling. The only thing that I really like about it is a handful of the dialogue because I always find that to be the fun part. Ugh idk. SOS
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flynnolium

Yeesh I just reread Kings Racetrack from the beginning to make sure I wasn’t leaving anything out and.. ew the first two chapters are ROUGH. The temptation I have to rewrite them is INSANE. But at the same time I kinda wanna leave them alone because it shows my progress between 2022-2024 quite a lot.. I’d like to think I’ve improved enough 
          
          But UGH WHY DID I WRITE LIKE THAT???

flynnolium

The urge to rewrite chapters 1 and 2 of Kings Racetrack is STRONG again. I just saw newsies live at a local theatre and my brain is buzzing to write. Instead of idk WRITING THE NEXT CHAPTER I instead just wanna demolish the first two chapters and maybe the 3rd. I wanna try and explain what I was trying to get across better, especially the Brooklyn and Midtown stuff because 2022 me was just babbling. The only thing that I really like about it is a handful of the dialogue because I always find that to be the fun part. Ugh idk. SOS
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