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Man, you don’t know how much I LOVE your book Gloom. It’s truly amazing, you’re very talented.

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          He rejects her even though that could kill her and put him at odds with his wolf. Oh and make him weak. Si now I'm suppose too believe that the whole pack are a bunch of psycho abusers but also have death wishes. I mean a weak alpha can't be good for the pack.  
          
          Anyway so the alpha regrets it and feels bad while main girl is off being bad ass. You know making friends even though she couldnt in her own pack with her shinning personality and finding good looking alphas who were also rejected?? Too debate over being with. Don't forget main girl is actually the moon goddess younger half sister or some mess so she awesome and hot. She's the damn sun and everything revolves around her. Why?? Why??
          
          Can I get a story where the guys the one who can't seem too catch a break?? Can I?? Can the girl be the hot asshole for once??
          
          Also can we make dialogue believable?? Can characters do things that make sense?? Can we stop describing what a freaking character is wearing down too their panty size but not explain simple things like location and feelings??

I did a bad thing. :( I ranted in a review. I was reading this story, and it was alright honestly. It just wasn't anything new. You know what I mean.      
          
          I've been reading alot of stories lately and I find myself wanting too hide in a corner. Every now and again I'll run across a good unique story. You know opposite the usual really rich guy perfect girl story. And they've been enough too keep me around. 
          
          I don't mind a really rich main guy but sometimes I just wonder why. Why does he have too be so stinking rich?? I noticed something. It seems just too be pure laziness on the writers part. I mean, a hot guy with a clunker for a car totally disgusting right?? Plus middle class guys prob don't have a lot of fancy parties the main girl can become Cinderella for and get into some altercation with some bitchy generic girl main girl hates because she's a slut even though main guy who main girl cannot stop visualizing naked is or was a bitchy slut before she came along and turned humpty Dumpty into an amulet or whatever. 
          
          I like stories with struggle I think most people do. That way you can root for the main character. I'm just tired of the struggle in most stories being oddly insane ex girl friends who no one noticed was insane until new sweet girl came along. Note most people discover someone is insane pretty early on in a meeting. 
          
          Now werewolf stories oh how I am found of you or wish I could be. I've read a couple good ones. 
          
          There are a few different types of these stories. One; the abused Luna. Now I'm a little different and I like a good abuse story. Human struggle and triumph for the win. But come on. The one where the girl is abused by her whole pack for some strange illogical and vague reason. Seriously?? Everyone in the pack hates and beats up on this chick for no reason?? I'm suppose too believe that?? It gets worse. She's the Luna. The top bitch. The pepper in the chili. So now dear alpha is in denial and angry rejects her.

I was thinking my next story could be something about two people being kidnapped by a crazy woman. I know that's not really unique but I was kinda hoping I could make it so. What do you guys think??